I am doing an edit pass on a story appearing later this year. Here are, essentially, patch notes.
- the protagonist will no longer accidentally transform into a water feature
- tenses have been normalized
- anachronistic city lighting decisions have been revised
- the lake has been removed
- there is now a transition to mark the appearance of the unhallowed dead
- the camel is no longer abandoned forlornly
This is why editors are very important and wonderful people.